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Stranded by the side of the road with a broken down vehicle in the middle of the hot New Mexico desert, Danny Major figured that, at very least, nothing else could go wrong. Then he arrived at Motel X.Before long, the young man is captured, restrained, and pushed beyond his physical, mental, and sexual limits, thrown into a twisted world of bondage, sadomasochism, and discStranded by the side of the road with a broken down vehicle in the middle of the hot New Mexico desert, Danny Major figured that, at very least, nothing else could go wrong. Then he arrived at Motel X.Before long, the young man is captured, restrained, and pushed beyond his physical, mental, and sexual limits, thrown into a twisted world of bondage, sadomasochism, and discipline, a world where survival means submission. Can Danny escape his torturous fate? Or is he destined to be broken down into the perfect slave?[AUTHOR'S NOTE: This is an adult story focused on themes of bondage, discipline, and sadomasochism between adult men. Subject matter includes explicit sexual activity and increasingly intense BDSM scenes (captivity, fisting, dubious consent, watersports, electro-torture, enemas etc.), and is intended purely as erotic fantasy for mature readers. If such material offends you, or if it is illegal to own or read such material in the area where you live, then you should find another title.]...

Title : Breakdown Motel
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ISBN : 11323674
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Number of Pages : 395 Pages
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Breakdown Motel Reviews

  • mark monday
    2019-02-02 14:38

    mark monday's GUIDE TO WRITING NONCONSENSUAL GAY BDSM EROTICA FOR MARK MONDAY *1) employ realism. for example, a fist up a basically untouched ass? with no damage? like for real? I don't think so. unless we're dealing with fantasy creatures or people with special ass powers, the lack of reality in this bit took me right out of the story. being perplexed is not being turned on.2) maybe not 100% evil cruelty from beginning to end. I dunno. perhaps it's just me, but I like a little something to lighten up the darkness. just a little! a good deal of time was spent making our victim sweet, "normal" (whatever that means), excited about the post-college world to come and happily making plans, he's just a nice kid about to start his life, you know... and later he even bonds with a fellow slave, plans to escape, etc... all that info designed to hammer you in the gut when you realize there is no hope. all of that unrelenting brutality began to depress me rather than interest me. and no escape in the end! sweet Jesus. I'm all for exploring the dark side but honestly: total hopelessness is not sexy. being depressed is not being turned on.3) goofy fantasies are not reality. I could perhaps get down with a sex novel that details a realistic situation or relationship that turns fucked up, power dynamics that turn brutal and cruel, sadism, etc. it may not even turn me on but at least it will be interesting. shit like that happens and intense psychodrama can be compelling. but a motel that is a sex farm slash slave training ground that houses pretty young lads led to their annihilation by an evil trans woman temptress named Trixie? cough. the whole situation is so improbable it should have been set in some fantasy world written by Ann Rice under a pseudonym. or set in some war-torn Salo type era and functioning as a sickening commentary on fascism. but brutal Masters who run a sex farm and relax by wearing corny leather harnesses and leather chaps and who utter corny lines right out of some corny bdsm porno? come on now, that's just lame. being stricken by a bout of derisive laughter is not being turned on.4) evil trans women named Trixie = not hot for mark monday. now don't get me wrong, I have nothing against the various trans communities and for the most part I think they are awesome. heck I've dated trans women myself back in the day so this is not a turned on/turned off by all the trans-gressiveness (get it?) type issue. but a hot trans lady with a huge dick who is a part of this evil crew of boy-slavers and who turns out to be just as cruel and just as corny as the rest and who is also named Trixie? does not work for me. not sure why exactly except it just seemed so unrealistic and goofy that yet again I was taken out of the story and found myself rolling my eyes and getting annoyed. being irritated is not being turned on.5) trite is trite, even in nonconsensual gay bdsm erotica. and one thing that is really trite is the tale of a victim who embraces their victimization and realizes that they are born to be a slave, that their fate is to be someone's property, and that is oh such a humiliating secret turn-on for them. yeah I know that that mentality exists and the idea of being someone's property is a common enough fantasy. but the key word here is "common". perhaps I have just read too much nonconsensual gay bdsm erotica, cough, but this scenario is PLAYED OUT. these victims who turn into slaves and who secretly love it and who eventually embrace their slave destiny and who say the same damn things in every damn story of this type... ugh. they all talk and think the same. repetition does not make the heart grow fonder and it certainly does not make mark monday's dick grow harder. trite is not hot. being bored by the same regurgitated nonsense I've read in so many other places... is not being turned on.6) don't waste a perfectly good book title. cause yeah, that's a pretty good title.* if you are not writing Nonconsensual Gay BDSM Erotica specifically for mark monday, well I suppose you can adjust this Guide as you see fit. sigh.

  • JustJen
    2019-02-10 14:33

    Wow. This one is creeeepy. Not really sure how to review it, other than to say I liked it a lot. It is like a bad horror flick mixed with somewhat erotic and hot at times bdsm slavery. I felt myself cringing at some of the punishments and treatments and losing hope right along with Danny and the nine. Eric is something else, right up to the end. I really wish it didn't end where it did, and that I had a sequel to jump right into continuing the story. I'm glad I was finally able to get my hands on this book.

  • ♆ BookAddict✒ La Crimson Femme
    2019-01-31 16:29

    This is a good start. I enjoyed Mr. Marton's sad tortures of a straight boy and forcing him into a cock sucking sex slave. It was depraved and deviant. This story was a very fast read, less than 30 minutes. The story flowed. There was a decent amount of showing rather than telling. Definitely a niche BDSM taboo story. For me there were a few things that weren't realistic - eagle scout? Really, I don't believe it. Fisting on a virgin? Really, I don't believe it but it is still hot.Well Slave number X - there's a reason why your momma told you not to talk to strangers! The ending leaves it as a possible second story. Honestly, the ending didn't surprise me. I guess I'm too jaded. I look forward to the second story. I want to know what happens next.

  • Simsala
    2019-01-21 11:18

    Without getting the chance to build up some kind of emotional connection to/between the characters a BDSM story like this - strung together cruelties/sadistic fantasies increasing in intensity from chapter to chapter - is neither "hot" nor "terrifying" it simply is just...meh....

  • Adrian Anderson
    2019-01-21 13:40

    If this is what people spend their time fantasizing about...and the subconscious guides our overt actions...then it's no wonder we live in such a sick sick world.

  • Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
    2019-02-08 15:34

    Giving it a... uhmmm.... 3 stars I think. Am kinda confused how I should rate this one. Not tat I dislike it. But I don't exactly find it memorable. That's where the problem is for me. I need the images to burn itself into my mind and not leave me anytime soon for it to make it into my 4 to 5 stars rating. It does have some hardcore BDSM to satisfy those who craves it. Like the fisting of a virgin ass (left my jaw hanging as my brain was too busy debating whether that is even a possible feat), piercing, pissing, enema, branding, canning and such.Tried as I might to treat this book as a fantasy only hence there is the wide leeway of anything is possible. Therefore, I did kept reminding myself to maintain an open mindset when I am reading it (as per the advice of other readers based on their reviews). Anyhow, I still couldn't get pass the niggling aspect where the protagonist, Danny had suddenly shift into submissive slutty mode although he is supposed to be straight and very innocent to all these extreme D/S stuff being forced upon him. Lol, I even thought I missed something along the way. Why is he being so pliable and accepting all out of a sudden? Shouldn't he even try to question himself a little? Even a closeted gay would have questions. Then again, maybe Danny's little head has more dominant control over him OR... because this is supposed to be a novella hence once again there's the famous race-against-time factor here? If you could overlook the bit of OOC-ness here, it's all pretty entertaining in a way. I quite like it and don't hate it since I did gave it a 3 stars. Another thing is that if you are looking for a good healthy dose of angst, I don't think you could find it here.

  • Shira Anthony
    2019-02-04 10:24

    One of the hottest M/M books I've read to date! Totally kinky, non-con/dub-con sex abounds, and definitely NOT for the faint of heart. This is NOT a romance, more PWP, and although there isn't much plot, there is an interesting psychological component to the novella. Well-written, only minor typos here and there but nothing distracting. This is kinky M/M slave/BDSM erotica at its best!VERY MILD SPOILERS: (view spoiler)[Danny is a college grad on his way to take the perfect job cross country. When he picks up a hot little number (female) at a truck stop, he figures the cards are just stacked in his favor. Life is good. But the sexy little thing leads him headlong into a sex slavery ring and soon Danny is on his way to taking his place amongst the other male slaves. Without giving away a wonderful plot twist towards the end, suffice it to say that I am looking forward to the sequel. (hide spoiler)]Just to reiterate: if you are not into serious kink (as in enemas, bondage, non-con/rape scenarios), this is NOT the book for you. I think the warnings are pretty clear. This is serious erotica. Some of the reviews on Amazon were negative and I have to wonder if those reviewers paid attention to the warnings.So, if you're looking for a short, kinky romp, this was a blast. Definitely a re-read for me. When I catch my breath, that is!

  • Jo * Smut-Dickted *
    2019-02-12 13:26

    Twisted all to hell if you like non-con then this fantasy will more than satisfy. This is not meant in any way to represent reality (at least any reality I know) and it is purely in fantasy land for me. ATM, fisting of a virgin, etc etc - the way it happened is just fantasy not in any way meant to represent reality. It's like the insta-love so popular in romance -- I might enjoy it in my books but in real life it just ain't so. Harsh, non relenting, and with new and darker depravities just around the corner this is strictly for the Depraved Minds Club group!I got mine on Smashwords for $2.99.

  • Sydney Squidney
    2019-02-03 12:24

    1.5 StarsThe author's note pretty much sums up the themes in this abduction/slavery story, to be clear, this is definitely **extremely explicit** Non-Con BDSM except I would add to the subject matter that there is also mentions of explicit (consensual) sexual activity between a transsexual and a man, in addition to the non-con and dub-con sadomasochism between adult men.Now that that's out of the way, I''ll agree with another reviewer that there is nothing really erotic about this story, while it does depict abuse and captivity situations, there is little, if any in the way of hurt-comfort and romance.I was hoping for a decent amount of hurt-comfort and found none, and what bit of romantic intrigue between slaves, or any characters for that matter, was unsatisfactory within this story.This is essentially Non-Con PWP with BDSM, and could be somewhat "trashy" by some people's definition - be warned.My summary -PROS: If you're looking to get hot off of quickly escalated forced sex slave/submission written with no apologies for lack of development or intimacy and need a quick fix, then this FANTASY Non-Con is for you.Or perhaps you can enjoy this from a sub/slave angle, it after all involves the kidnapping and abuse of an (albeit suspiciously compliant) hetero male. Or if you just simply enjoy straight boys forced into into the seedy underworld of sexual slavery, torture and pain, you'll get that with this.CONS: No character depth, the abducted is rather devoid of an internal struggle, not very believable events between the impalpable virgin fisting scene and the accelerated transition from straight boy to easily-docile cock-hungry slave boy. Lousy dialogue. No intimacy, no hurt/comfort, which is my biggest complaint. Only a little dub-con.WHAT I LIKED BEST: That I didn't pay more than $2.99 to read this.WARNING: Do not read this story if you are sensitive to or disagree with non-con torture and pain and other extremes.

  • Aimee
    2019-02-07 16:41

    I enjoyed this more than I thought I would. I don't mind the gay erotica, but sometimes the kidnapped and forced sex slave stuff gets to me. But not in this one. While Danny (nka X) does find himself in a bad situation, he's also seemed to find some sort of tormentor who doesn't want to harm him. Too much, anyway. I liked the story a lot. I knew going in it wasn't a long story, but I was actually wishing that it was longer because I enjoyed the characters and the look inside the bdsm world that was set up in this book. The ending gives us the feeling it might be just the start, and I'm hoping I'm right in that assumption, because I would love to read more!

  • Beck
    2019-02-11 11:40

    I read the warnings & reviews for this book but for some reason I thought it was a story about a consensual non-con rape fantasy. This seems to be a misconception on my part. This was horrific. If rape & abuse is your idea of safe, sane & consensual BDSM then read away. If you are more into the sugar/glitter kink genre, I'd avoid this book completely.Part of the reason for my 'misconception' was that I expect authors/publishers to have clearly stated warnings when non-consensual rape is in the book. I felt the warning in this book left a lot to be desired.

  • Vivian
    2019-01-28 11:45

    Unrealistic, but entertaining. And as usual, heed the advisory warnings.Several not-possible-in-real-life episodes that made me go, "yeah, right." On the plus side, it plays into some deep seated fears people have and exploits then well. I was going to give it two stars, but the twist at the end made me up it to three. And, now I want to know what happens in the sequel.

  • Don Bradshaw
    2019-01-17 14:24

    A short but hot expedition into the world of slavery. It was interesting to have the unbroken boys POV and the master's POV. Not for the squeamish as there are some harsh BDSM scenes. I was very surprised by the ending and am looking forward to book two.

  • Vicki
    2019-01-17 16:42

    Dark kinky fun. mwah hahaha.

  • Sally
    2019-02-02 11:34

    Oh my goodness, what a scorching, submissive, succulent read Breakdown Motel was! It is a very good thing I chose to read this one alone, curled up in bed, because I am sure that my gasps and whimpers would have given me away to anybody around me.The story starts out with a high-speed blowjob on a barren desert highway, setting the tone of sexual excitement and danger that defines the entire story. When his car explodes at the same moment his cock does, Danny and his beautiful hitchhiking companion are left to wait in the desert heat and hope for rescue. Fortunately, a tow truck does happen upon the couple, and the driver is kind enough to set them up with the very last room - at a discount! - in the cheap motel his brother owns.All sorts of warning bells there, but even after Trixie returns to their room with an already opened bottle of soda, Danny is far too naive to catch on. That is where the fun begins. In one of the most sexually charged scenes of submission I have ever had the pleasure of enjoying, a drugged Danny is rendered physically immobile, but remains completely aware of the sights, sounds, and sensations around him. Helpless to resist, he watches as the beautiful Trixie reveals herself to be the beautiful transsexual Trixie, forces him to return the favour of the blowjob, and then claims his anal cherry.Before long, Danny is branded, collared, and forced into service as 1 of 10 sexual slaves at the aptly named Motel X. While I am not usually a fan of torture and pain, it is handled very well here, and it all has its purpose. More importantly, it is coupled with the intense mental and emotional breaking of a reluctant straight boy, into an eager gay sex slave. The ways in which he slowly comes around to his captivity, and begins to find not just pleasure but satisfaction in his role, touched so many of my own submissive heartstrings that I found it very easy to put myself in his place.Much to my surprise, there's even some romance to the tale, with Danny and another slave becoming quite passionate, but also with Danny discovering feelings for his captor. The ending is a bit too much (a bit unnecessary even), and lacks the climactic reunion with Trixie that I craved (a princess can dream!), but it works well from a BDSM perspective.Definitely a very hot tale, Breakdown Motel should hold as much appeal for my fellow submissive as for those who love to use and abuse us.

  • Rachael
    2019-01-28 16:18

    I had been trying to get ahold of this book for a while, amazon had pulled it then wouldn't let it be lent out. I couldn't find it anywhere. Then it was back on amazon and I'm so glad it was. This was a story that had my mind spinning. It is fiction! It didn't really happen so I can imagine the fisting happening as quickly as it did but I can't imagine what state his mind must have been in in order to give in so quickly. I was hoping for more fight, Danny just seemed to take it.I will be looking for more from this author.

  • Miss Asima
    2019-01-18 16:26

    If you like this book you may enjoy the BDSM Group Definitly worth my time. I really enjoyed this little abduction/slavery story! The writing was well done - no complaints from me in that area. I also liked how original it was. At least for my shelves. lol If you know of any more like this send them my way. :)I also thought that even though there is quite a bit of extreme content it's easy to handle. ??? It could just be me but I think the edgier parts were tastefully done. As tastefull as taboo can get any way.

  • Sue bowdley
    2019-02-09 14:36

    Ok....This was a pretty brutal...torturous...disturbing read....Poor Danny did not know what hit him when he arrived at Motel x and became Masons "Number Ten".....Making a friend in Eric for a short time.....But the way Mason treated him and punished him...But seriously..that first scene (view spoiler)[ Taking a fist up his a** without any previous anal play(hide spoiler)] ouch.....I really felt sorry for Danny...I couldn't completely hate Mason when he showed his softer side but still he was evil x

  • Jae
    2019-02-15 11:42

    Just not what I expected. As a little confused with the ending like many. Dan broke way too quickly and easily for me. I understand the stress of the situation and having no choice but to do what's expected, but his mind set just changed in a snap. There was barely any internal struggle. He went from OMG I will never accept this to this is how I always wanted to be deep down in a matter of hours.

  • Jeff Erno
    2019-02-15 09:20

    Brilliant, creative, intense,creepy, scary, and absolutely delicious. Personally I could do without the fisting... not my thing. Otherwise, I loved it. Can't wait to read more from this author.WARNING: Careful, not for everyone. If you don't appreciate extreme BDSM including humiliation, degradation, and forced submission, you won't want to go anywhere near this book.

  • Natalie
    2019-02-12 13:26

    I'm trying to put my finger on what I find most objectionable about this story, and it's not the nonconsensual BDSM; it's the lack of emotion. I just didn't care about any of the characters, and without that connection, this is only torture porn. The competent writing is saving it from a one-star rating, but just barely.

  • Andrea
    2019-01-19 13:22

    I really don't like slave / non- con or dub-con stories that are labeled with BDSM. For me this is sadism and nothing else.And I really don't like rape stories.This story has it all. And it was too short to get connected to the main character. So it was nothing but non-con porn ... and nothing I want to read again.

  • Susu
    2019-02-10 14:36

    Wow! This book blew my mind. I did not see the ending coming, I even went back and reread parts I didn't pay enough attention to the first time. Alot of parts in the book made me uncomfortable but by the end of the book I wanted more to know what happened next in the story. This book was a total mindf*ck.

  • Skye Blue ☆*~゚ლ(´ڡ`ლ)~*☆
    2019-02-10 15:30

    A little far fetched, but enjoyable. I was expecting it to be a stand out story, one you don't forget...It's not. Make sure you read the warnings, it's not role play here people. is unrealistic enough that its not an emotional read. I liked it...but that's just me.

  • Vfields Don't touch my happy!
    2019-02-01 11:44

    Odd, this was some really over the top hardcore/brutal sex but it wasn't as powerful as lets say, A Dish Served Cold. Without complete character and story development it fell short but was a fine read. Short was the operative word!

  • Stefanie139
    2019-01-28 10:20

    I never know if I should review a book I stopped reading, but when someone else gives one star, I usually wonder why, so here: While I am fascinated by stories that walk the fine line between con and non-con, outright torture is not erotic. If there is torture, I'll accept it if the book is hurt-comfort. That's not the case here, so - not my beer.

  • Steelwhisper
    2019-02-10 11:41

    Very crude wank-off fantasy compared to Christopher Pierce's stories, which I believe this aims at.

  • Ayanna
    2019-01-19 12:39

    *blink. blink*What the fuck just happened?

  • Spynonu
    2019-01-29 10:45

    Quick read, non con with a bit of a WTF? twist. 3.5 stars.

  • Norah
    2019-02-06 10:33

    wow, intense, hot cruel sad just some of the words I would use with this book.I knew it would be intense but I just didnt realize how much it got to me. Its the story of Danny who breaks down on a remote part of the highway.He is picked up only to be kidnapped and taken to a remote hotel. Here danny learns he is to become a sex slave to the motel owner and his nasty band of sadists. He is branded number 10 and so begins his initiation and torment on the rules of being a slave. This book really had me from the start. Gosh I felt Dannys pain, Im sure I even felt the brand being burnt into his ass. ( hurt like hell too, w* )You really feel the emotions of pain , humilation , terror and sadness danny goes through , Thoroully well written.Takes you to a place you may find uncomftable but it has that ability which you want in a book to actually take you to that zone. Worth a read absolutly. I will read this again . If you like a book which contains a storyline that will make you squirm a little, but keep you on the end of your seat and make you feel something,,, this is for you....