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Dear Author,We have what appears to be a Dom and his sub, but appearances can be deceiving. These two men are actually undercover. While their personas are masks, the emotion in this photo is very real.What has brought these two men to this point of giving and receiving comfort?Photo Description: Two older, good-looking men caught in an intimate moment after a good time inDear Author,We have what appears to be a Dom and his sub, but appearances can be deceiving. These two men are actually undercover. While their personas are masks, the emotion in this photo is very real.What has brought these two men to this point of giving and receiving comfort?Photo Description: Two older, good-looking men caught in an intimate moment after a good time in a BDSM club. They are dressed in leather with their T-shirts tucked in their belts. They look dangerous with all that exposed muscle, but still share a touch of tenderness where one man’s hands rest at the waist of the other while they press their foreheads together.This story was written as a part of the M/M Romance Group's "Love Has No Boundaries" event. Group members were asked to write a story prompt inspired by a photo of their choice. Authors of the group selected a photo and prompt that spoke to them and wrote a short story....

Title : Only Mine
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ISBN : 18195948
Format Type : ebook
Number of Pages : 37 Pages
Status : Available For Download
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Only Mine Reviews

  • Vivian
    2019-04-09 14:21

    3.5 starsSweet and hot submission from a strong male. Spencer's found something more in himself and he knows he can't live without it. Will Gavin be able to be there for him? Nice start for these two men in what promises to be some divine, loving M/s. Need more...

  • K
    2019-04-14 10:17

    LHNB story released 9.8.13Really nicely written short story of a police officer going into a BDSM club for a slave auction to extract another investigator from a different agency who has been posing as a slave in training on an exclusive island for the previous two months. In reality though the police officer is a Dom and the investigator a sub, not only that but they've played together in the past. Now with the investigator being sold at the slave auction the police officer has a chance become his full time Master, if their jobs don't get in the way.

  • Julesmarie
    2019-03-28 16:53

    This had elements that I've seen in other stories: cops going undercover into BDSM clubs, realizing you know the person you're supposed to be there to extract, even police officers who enjoy being submissive.I really liked that even though so many elements were familiar, the story still managed to feel fresh. I enjoyed both of the characters. I liked that their history together, and especially their reason for breaking up, made sense.Lovely story.3.5 stars, rounded up

  • Silkeeeeee
    2019-03-28 13:03

    The one thing this author does well is make her MCs come to life. Very quick, hot read. I would love to read a full novel about these two.

  • Tully Vincent
    2019-04-01 14:03

    I found this short story well-written and hot. The characters had a backstory despite the short length of the story! Enjoyed that one MC was a bit older and also enjoyed seeing a strong and masculine sub. Would have liked more. . . for instance, to see them back in their real life. But still a fun read.

  • DKristin
    2019-03-26 10:21

    I really enjoyed this one and really really want to know what life for Spencer and Gavin is like after.

  • Sunny
    2019-04-15 17:21

    Although the plot felt rushed and a little too easy, I really liked the interactions between Gavin and Spencer and would love to read more.

  • Virginia
    2019-03-29 15:08

    I liked that there was a history for the MCs. Plot a bit light but it is a free short and I appreciate the author's time in the LHNB event.

  • Kira
    2019-04-07 12:10

    this is really 4.5 stars for me, only losing that .5 because i needed it to be longer!!! it's rare to get a BDSM story where the characters have great chemistry, truly care about each other, and are well written.i hope this gets fleshed out into a full-length novel, i'll buy it!

  • Victoria
    2019-04-21 17:12

    3.5 - I really enjoyed this story and the characters. I would love to read more about these two. Nice interpretation of the photo and the story letter. Thank you Valentina Heart for donating your story, your time and your talent.

  • Suze
    2019-04-21 10:07

    Part of the 2013 Don't Read in the Closet event, Love Has No Boundaries.another good tense read. I liked the way the story went from the photo, using police/undercover as the main story but liked the little twist of BDSM for real. Another of my favourites for this year.

  • Izzah Zulaikha
    2019-04-19 10:06

    This was a nice, sweet, my type story xD

  • Rachel Emily
    2019-03-30 13:53

    I really enjoyed this! I just loved the characters, thank you for a great story!

  • Katy Beth Mckee
    2019-04-20 10:57

    There is lots of great tension and you to work out how they can settle things. Beautiful but they get what they really want.

  • Bookbee
    2019-04-02 10:55

    3.75 StarsGreat story that absolutely worked with the photo and the prompt! I was completely drawn into the story and would certainly welcome more about Gavin and Spencer!

  • Janie
    2019-04-08 16:21

    Very insightful to the slave/master lifestyle. I think this could have been an even better story had it been longer.

  • Monique
    2019-03-28 12:17

    I enjoy short reads. But I would have loved more in this one because I would have loved to read their life after this. Oh well. I loved that they shared a bit of history.

  • MerliannsCam
    2019-04-09 15:55

    3 Stars :)

  • Joseph Tonlet
    2019-04-10 09:56

    Enjoyable short.

  • Melanie~~
    2019-03-25 15:18

    The first time I read through this story, I was rushed and some of it didn't quite make sense. I knew I wanted to give it another go so see if I grasped more when I wasn't under the gun. It did. There are still a few minor issues trying to unravel the main characters' previous relationship, but I enjoyed the writing and Gavin's borderline devotion. Though I'd like to know more about how they got Spencer out of the mess he'd made with his department, the story ended in a good place for a short.The only wrinkle that pushed me out of the story was Gavin making Spencer (spoiler to hidecrudeness) (view spoiler)[suck him off with a condom on (I absolutely HATE that.), but then right after, Gavin mouths Spencer's cock and slit. (hide spoiler)][NOTE: I rate most writing event stories (free reads) 4 or 5 stars because of my appreciation of the author's participation.]

  • Gail Thompson
    2019-04-20 11:59

    This is a free story written as part of the Romance without boundaries event. This is where writers of M/m romance were asked to select a photo and writing prompt supplied by a fan of the genre and write an original tale.In this story we have two undercover officers. One has been in deep cover for months training to be a sex slave and the other a part time dom who has been asked to go under and retrieve the first officer. What the rest of the force don't know, and even the two officers themselves don't know until that night in club, is that these two have a history together as dom and sub. They are still drawn together.Great pace in this story, and back story and details that are eked out in just the right amounts. You can feel that they have great chemistry. I also liked the book understood and clearly expressed the feelings of the sub.

  • Jo * Smut-Dickted *
    2019-03-25 16:04

    Great characterization for a short. I liked both men - and they still have secrets to share. I'm not normally a fan of POV shift but here it really lent a lot to the story. Made it resonate deeper. There is a lot of potential for expansion here and I'm sure I'm not the only one who wants more!

  • Jeanne 'Divinae'
    2019-04-14 10:05

    Excellent story. Really enjoyed the background info that was sneaked in, giving more depth to Gavin and Spencer. Happy they were able to 'find' each other again and realize what the really meant to one another.

  • Teresa
    2019-04-12 17:12

    Great read! Short but was able to feel the attraction between the mc's as well as believe them in their roles as Dom and Sub. Only thing that bugged me was one gloves up for a bj but then returns the favour with out protection?! what was the point of that?

  • Tamara (緑)
    2019-04-07 12:57

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  • Meggie
    2019-03-31 11:21

    Hm, what a strange short story. Personally totally undeveloped and incomplete, too. I didn't like it!

  • xiin
    2019-04-10 10:14

    cute short story

  • Theresa
    2019-04-03 16:14

    I didn't understand the condom usage on Gavin but not on Spencer.

  • Lauren
    2019-04-17 10:59

    3.5 stars

  • Morgana
    2019-04-19 11:15

    3.25 stars