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A family day out to visit the site of an old battlefield; a young girl scared and alone; her cries for assistance answered by something ancient. It has lain in the cold and dark of the bog, waiting patiently for a host to set it free. Now, for John Cluer and his family, nothing will ever be the same again.A novelette of approximately 10,000 words....

Title : Gloop!
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ISBN : 24560082
Format Type : Kindle Edition
Number of Pages : 50 Pages
Status : Available For Download
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Gloop! Reviews

  • Jason Parent
    2019-05-31 08:46

    Sorta spoiler alert?So a person has something sinister living inside her... that speaks to her telepathically... to which she speaks in return outwardly... what kinda of sick bastard would write something like that? Wait a minute...um...never mind.A mandatory must-like for me, and a fun tale, despite the omniscient point of view.

  • Kimberly
    2019-06-15 05:51

    Now this one, I really enjoyed! Alice Cluer first met her 'invisible friend", Gloop, when she was just four years old. After all, everyone needs someone to watch their back!

  • Kimberly
    2019-06-15 07:04

    Now this one, I really enjoyed! Alice Cluer first met her 'invisible friend", Gloop, when she was just four years old. After all, everyone needs someone to watch their back!

  • David Brian
    2019-06-01 12:04

    Children often have one special friend only they can see. Alice Cluer has such a companion, and he has been with her since childhood. They think he's a figment of Alice's imagination, because Gloop rarely reveals himself.Those few who do see him, they are the unlucky ones.

  • Stella Abbrams
    2019-06-04 09:04

    Through most of this I was thinking I wouldn't mind a friend like Gloop... and then I changed my mind.

  • John
    2019-05-16 10:41

    A well written horror tale, although the route it was traveling seemed fairly predictable. But the unexpected curve ball ending rounded this off nicely.

  • Sheila
    2019-05-18 07:59

    An interesting story, but with a somewhat disturbing ending.

  • Stephen Cordingley
    2019-06-06 06:02

    This novella begins with a family enjoying their day out at the site of an old fort and battlefield. The young daughter gets stuck while trying to retrieve a lost ball, and while she is separated from her family a bizarre creature secretes itself inside of her.The story then moves to a period later in the girl's life, and amid snippets of back-story we learn that dark incidents have clouded the (now) young woman's life.This was a well written and creepy story, and I read it in one sitting.

  • Sarah Hunter
    2019-05-30 12:04

    Alice Cluer has an invisible friend named Gloop. Alice's boyfriend is a bullying prick, and Gloop isn't happy with the way Alice is being treated. There's trouble on the horizon, and it comes with a capital 'G'.

  • Simon
    2019-06-03 05:52

    I liked this. A story about a child and her (not always) invisible friend. As Alice grows older, Gloop - unlike most invisible friends - decides he's staying around. Given his propensity to be overly protective of Alice, this might well create problems.

  • David Brian
    2019-06-15 07:06

    Children often have one special friend only they can see. Alice Cluer has such a companion, and he has been with her since childhood. They think he's a figment of Alice's imagination, because Gloop rarely reveals himself.Those few who do see him, they are the unlucky ones.

  • Cheryl Earle
    2019-06-13 13:06

    What a creepy little story this was! It started out with an overwhelming sense of dread, progressing on to what was quite a visceral ending. Maybe possessive imaginary friends are not that good for you! ;)

  • Josie
    2019-05-20 05:50

    Wicked story about a girl and the monster that lives inside her! Loved the ending!

  • Dorothy Cotton
    2019-05-25 10:47

    A surprisingly entertaining tale about a girl and her secret friend. The Cluer family decide to take a day trip to the site of an ancient battlefield, but not all the fallen were prepared to fade and die. Young Alice Cluer stumbles across something strange, something intent on staying with her. Now, for the whole family their world is about to be turned upside down.

  • Kaddi
    2019-06-01 13:05

    A fun and gruesome fable about a girl and her best friend, and what happens when you p**s them off!

  • Lorraine
    2019-06-12 12:49

    An entertaining slice of horror hokum!

  • Sarah Kingsley
    2019-06-05 14:00

    Good creepy fun! This Alice doesn't go down the rabbit hole, instead something ancient creeps out of a bog, and Alice's new friend doesn't appreciate anyone upsetting his girl!

  • Dustin Pendleton
    2019-06-14 06:46

    A brief but entertaining tale of a girl and her friend. Mind you, with friends like this...

  • June
    2019-05-25 09:00

    Alice has a secret friend named Gloop. He likes to remain invisible... most of the time! An entertaining slice of lurking horror.