Mitch has been ogling Angelina from afar for years. She is absolutely perfect. Her sharp wit and majestic beauty would already make her the most popular girl on campus, even without being the women's basketball team's star athlete. A gift he found in his locker promised to make all his dreams come true. A simply designed, slick looking silver flashlight. Mitch was sure itMitch has been ogling Angelina from afar for years. She is absolutely perfect. Her sharp wit and majestic beauty would already make her the most popular girl on campus, even without being the women's basketball team's star athlete. A gift he found in his locker promised to make all his dreams come true. A simply designed, slick looking silver flashlight. Mitch was sure it was a scam, or a joke, or both. It was too good to be true, but it was also too good to ignore. He was given the opportunity of a lifetime, the attached note claimed, and he wasn't about to squander it. If all goes well, an entire team of sporty hotties, and their busty coach, will kneel before him in utter and complete submission. Not only that, but he will finally have Angelina the way he always fantasized, and he might find a new career path he never considered before. Oh, and he will make sure the team's big practice is so much more fun than anything Coach Summers planned. This story is approx. ~18,300 words long, and is exclusively for legal adults over the age of eighteen. *This erotica book is a work of fiction, and is for 18+ adults only. All characters in the book are 18+.*...
|Title||:||Mind Control Draft|
|Format Type||:||Kindle Edition|
|Number of Pages||:||55 Pages|
|Status||:||Available For Download|
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Mind Control Draft Reviews
Enjoyable read,The bimboification and objectification of the desirable fertile women around the protagonist, is a bit much for me. However, it does seem integral to the plot. Thus I only hope that the author continues but with the protagonist finding himself as bored with the overly expensive sex toys as would I. The author does introduce sex scenes early and often. The plot itself is primarily driven forward during the several pages of orgy that takes up the last 2/3rds of these story.Corrupting a fertile woman who is as, or more intelligent than the protagonist, towards harmoniously joining his will, would appeal to a wider audience. As it is, even with the slaves being thoroughly established as former bullies, this first story likely offense any woman with an ounce of self respect.As I said, for me, I would quickly realized boredom with my new toys. Vengeance and anger, are great motivators until he shows them the light. After that, his 'slaves' own him as much as he owns them. And it would be excessively cruel of him to just starve them off his attention in their souless state.Yes, without a will of their own, they are essentially Biological machines/computers; And without a soul.A novel continuing the protagonist's story would be great to read, feel do I. For me, 3/5 stars simply means it is most likely enjoyable only to those who favor the bimboification subgenre in erotica. The genre itself prejudices readers before they even look at this book's profile.Therefore, any sequel to branch outside of the genre and perhaps incorporate some actual romance may be awesome, believe do I.